Creates a sense of chasing - very similar to corn painting although unintentional. Like the cropping of the limbs (left figure). Some depth - not clear that figures are the same person. |
Dip pen and ink - unstable figure works and hair adds to sense of movement. Added architectural structure to figure - has a flattening effect but could work if more integrated in the body. |
I think this works as the figures seem to interact, maybe confront each other. Not sure about the masked faces as they are disengaged from the viewer - I like the gaze element... |
Grid lines are to support composition - better with integrated house (from out of studio window). Animal reference. |
Labyrinth 'Junk Lady' |
Grayson Perry - from Tomb of the Unknown Craftsman |
Really like the position of the figure but it got me thinking about environment and context (see notes) |
Figures in original photo composition - falling not clear |
Adjusted position of falling figure - now looks less dangerous, more like cradling...maybe something to do with the feet and leg position |
Reflection
I found this process of ideas very useful in terms of evolving my ideas and trying to create compositions. It is very important that I explore the context of figures and make structural decisions before I paint as this created some technical issues in the previous unit. I need to investigate environments and make structures (I'm still thinking about nests and buildings), although I must be careful not to illustrate an idea. At this stage I still want to collect more film as these images have proved to be the most animated which is moving me towards my intention of creating less static images. The pairs of figures work when they are both moving. I have realised that I really don't understand how to create a convincing physical space within the painting, so I am going to explore perspective and foreground, mid and background to create more of a scape. I had forgotten until I started writing that I wanted to look at adaptation and camouflage so I am considering face paint and looking at animal features to integrate in the images.
One month reflection
On reflection, the drawings which seemed most successful at the time are still those which I am working with (in whole or in part). The figure with the building on her back has evolved from my Red Fox painting and I am now planning on using this to show a body-morphing, shape shifting, transient structure. Largely, I am more confident in my decisions about creating 3D space now that I have done some experimenting with colour and there is a sense of ambiguity I can create with the positioning of the figures - my original concerns about this are mostly resolved although I've not yet made any larger scale work.
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